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55 words: corroded

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Ignoring the drumbeat, I increased pace to pass each float. I had no idea who I was searching for. Still, I scanned the parade-watchers for familiar faces. On occasion I glimpsed a long-forgotten acquaintance. Even a couple badly neglected friends. I did not greet them. Suddenly I felt old. Failing at nineteen. Young and… Corroded.
Another 55-word story, 10-9-8 format. Written last fall.
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Cavolonero's avatar
I forgot about fifty five word stories. Have to try this myself.